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Chapter 8 Grammar/Spelling Errors thread

Chapter 8 Grammar/Spelling Errors thread

Postby 'Lement » Sun Oct 10, 2010 1:19 am

Chapter 8

Page 41

Panel 3

Mel's speech bubble, third sentence: "You truly have an amazing abillity Ariel."

sb: "You truly have an amazing ability Ariel."/ex: l overload

I'd also add a comma before Ariel, but my commaing is rather weak in english so it probably is not needed.

Page 45

Panel 5.

Ariel, sixth sentence: "To slay a dangerous beast and dip our hair in the blood of it victim."

sb: "To slay a dangerous beast and dip our hair in the blood of it."/ex: superfluous "victim", "it" is more accurate.
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