Okay, I know it's not really a place to nitpick, but there's something that really bugs me at the current point...Here
, in the panel three, we can see that golem's leg is square-formed. This is very clear there.
Now, here on other hand
we can see that the original design is more... Fluent, round-shaped and natural.
I'd like to point that roundish shape allows:
-more protection, as there will always be wider area to take the impact compared to square's corners.
-no wasted space, as square's corners are almost impossible to use.
-better outlook. Fluent panther is way more intimidating that one made out of blocks.
Now, I understand perfectly that there are such things as artist's own vision/will to draw, time limits, materials and clan's own skill limits/ design factors.
But still, as the original poster of the design, I felt like pointing things out. Get them off my chest so I don't start sounding really angry AFTER we've built the whole thing.
If they are going to follow the original design (artist gonna draw final golem as more roundish) and this is just the mid-step of building, or if I'm rambling with no reason at all, I apologize in advance and thank for good and understanding work.