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chapter 54 : Cover

chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Kern » Thu Jan 04, 2018 5:07 am

The cover of chapter 54.
The crew from the prior chapters united with Chiri and Shan aboard the ship, flying by the city of Felde. I understand this answers the question of what the ship is a bit too early and it wasn't my favorite of the 5 cover concept(to be shown in the news later) but that answer would've been given on page 1 tomorrow regardless so it's not too much of a problem.
okay the real problem is that airship is not on fire. But i'd like to point out that Chiri DID push Ariel off the side at least. For ruining her special day.
Also Chakri in the forground, now a main character?! (gasp) maybe.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby SzordrinZaphresz » Thu Jan 04, 2018 5:44 am

Yay! Glad to see that it was Ariel's ship and not Snad's But hey, not Ariel's fault. Chiri never gave her an invite to the special occasion, nor notice. Just wait till Chiri meets the kids, and Vaelia. If anyone can be a good baby-sitter, it's her.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Black Knight LeFreux » Thu Jan 04, 2018 6:37 am

SzordrinZaphresz wrote:Yay! Glad to see that it was Ariel's ship and not Snad's But hey, not Ariel's fault. Chiri never gave her an invite to the special occasion, nor notice.


If Ariel simply arrive non-invited with a giant airship, she still took it better than Maleficent. 8P

Whoo, the gang's getting back together !!! *boogie*
Wiiith the notable exception of Chrys and Shinae. Hope we see them later, and on friendly terms.

Meanwhile, on the page cover...
Faen : "- Ariel, stop being stupid for once and get back here !!!" *eek*
Ariel : "- But I look so cool !" 8)
Faen : "- Sharess damnit, you're wearing a red armor, why do you act like a redshirt !" :[
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Moatl » Thu Jan 04, 2018 8:08 am

Seems like someone got a special offer on grey-brown paint… :)
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby jarek56 » Thu Jan 04, 2018 10:02 am

So who wants to take bets on who winds up dead before this is all over? :D
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Smokehammer » Thu Jan 04, 2018 10:19 am

Awe man, no future air battles. *upset*

jarek56 wrote:So who wants to take bets on who winds up dead before this is all over? :D
Im guessing nobody on this cover is going to die. Chrys, Shinae, Kiel, & Nau are up for grabs though and out of them? Im going with... Chrys.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby PSadlon » Thu Jan 04, 2018 2:40 pm

SzordrinZaphresz wrote:Yay! Glad to see that it was Ariel's ship and not Snad's But hey, not Ariel's fault. Chiri never gave her an invite to the special occasion, nor notice. Just wait till Chiri meets the kids, and Vaelia. If anyone can be a good baby-sitter, it's her.

Technically Lady Z's but I am sure this stories current harem protagonist negotiated some decent usage rights for his little sister. Probably along the lines of Z gets first pick of the booty taken and possibly access to his booty.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Moric » Thu Jan 04, 2018 3:25 pm

PSadlon wrote:
SzordrinZaphresz wrote:Yay! Glad to see that it was Ariel's ship and not Snad's But hey, not Ariel's fault. Chiri never gave her an invite to the special occasion, nor notice. Just wait till Chiri meets the kids, and Vaelia. If anyone can be a good baby-sitter, it's her.

Technically Lady Z's but I am sure this stories current harem protagonist negotiated some decent usage rights for his little sister. Probably along the lines of Z gets first pick of the booty taken and possibly access to his booty.

Possibly!?

Smokehammer wrote:Awe man, no future air battles. *upset*

jarek56 wrote:So who wants to take bets on who winds up dead before this is all over? :D
Im guessing nobody on this cover is going to die. Chrys, Shinae, Kiel, & Nau are up for grabs though and out of them? Im going with... Chrys.

Nau has already experienced death by snu snu off-screen.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Vestiline » Thu Jan 04, 2018 4:25 pm

Either way, Snad's gonna be PIIIIIISSSSED that they lost the ship and all of the crew they kidnapped on board in the first place.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Metzger » Thu Jan 04, 2018 4:47 pm

Wasila gonna stuff her face with wedding cake...and Nerguis face too of course :3
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Kardwill » Thu Jan 04, 2018 6:06 pm

How cute, our newlywed couple is going on honeymoon straight into a warzone *blush*
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Moric » Thu Jan 04, 2018 8:43 pm

Kardwill wrote:How cute, our newlywed couple is going on honeymoon straight into a warzone *blush*

Sounds idyllic to Kyorl sensibilities.
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby xellos » Fri Jan 05, 2018 1:14 am

Kardwill wrote:How cute, our newlywed couple is going on honeymoon straight into a warzone *blush*

As if Chiri would go anywhere else for a honeymoon
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby Junglefowl26 » Fri Jan 05, 2018 1:43 am

Interesting. Did they pick up the whole colony and leave?

Also interesting that they went to recruit Chiri - she was just there on vacation, and apparently Machike was fairly isolated. Must have been Faen's shipping sense. :P
Plus, she is technically on the alliance side. Technically.

Course easy to see why Chiri would agree. She was having her doubts about this whole peaceful life thing, and the rest of Ana's hippie talk. Time once more for glory via burning the enemy!
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Re: chapter 54 : Cover

Postby PSadlon » Fri Jan 05, 2018 2:00 am

Moric wrote:
PSadlon wrote:
SzordrinZaphresz wrote:Yay! Glad to see that it was Ariel's ship and not Snad's But hey, not Ariel's fault. Chiri never gave her an invite to the special occasion, nor notice. Just wait till Chiri meets the kids, and Vaelia. If anyone can be a good baby-sitter, it's her.

Technically Lady Z's but I am sure this stories current harem protagonist negotiated some decent usage rights for his little sister. Probably along the lines of Z gets first pick of the booty taken and possibly access to his booty.

Possibly!?

I am unsure of how possessive Lady Z & Ash'waren can be. It might be bad for Kel if one or both are too possessive or dislike each other too much to share nice.
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