This is all so sweet its almost giving me a toothache...
Joking aside as I said earlier I do feel that Shan and Chiri do deserve a sort of 'happily ever after' if anyone in this story really does. Still though...
- Find the placement of this chapter a bit strange as Kern is basically writing those two off for the remainder of the story maybe that was his intent and didn't think it would work as well as a sort of epilogue moment which I would disagree with since I feel this chapter while amusing I feel has broken up the pacing to what should be leading to the climactic end. That or we are going to have a yet another time skip and have mom, dad, and baby throwing out fireballs from a baby carrier helping to fend off the forces of the evil Snadya from the airship which would seem... excessive lol
- The panels on this page or more specifically that use of blank space seems off as others have mentioned. I know Kern likes to play with frames and spacing but having all square frames except for one in the top right doesn't feel dynamic so much as it feels like something is missing or at least to me anyway. For myself feels based on the framing of Chiri on the left Shan on the right for the others I would of imagined a panel of Shan looking at Chiri in awe or something.. but what do I know I am a terrible artist haha
Anyway its cute good for them hope they have many cute babies and I will wait for the start of the next chapter which will undoubtedly resume right in the middle of Ariel bombing the Sarg fort from the airship cause why not!
