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Chapter 53 : page 17

Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby Kern » Thu Dec 21, 2017 2:25 am

The wedding begins, basked in fire.
Because fire would be needed at a chiri wedding. Thanksfully the audience won't be on fire.
I understand not much action is going on, or political drama. No worries(or worry, hey its up to you) its coming soon enough.
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby Ardan Styyx » Thu Dec 21, 2017 2:38 am

The calm before the storm is for once a blessed moment.
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby Hfar » Thu Dec 21, 2017 3:04 am

Kern wrote:Thankfully the audience won't be on fire.

Eh, wait until they start serving the wine and then we'll see.
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby Junglefowl26 » Thu Dec 21, 2017 3:14 am

So magical Chiri stopped grumping for a bit. *heehee*

Good thing too with the big fire there.
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby Durlyn Val'Sarghress » Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:32 am

Awwww, its finally happening! So beautiful! *tear* I always cry at weddings! *crying*

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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby The14th » Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:53 am

The Fae sure know how to light a wedding.
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby SzordrinZaphresz » Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:58 am

Almost wordless. So beautiful! I love weddings!
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Re: Chapter 52 : page 17

Postby sunhawk » Thu Dec 21, 2017 6:07 am

Is the top right panel supposed to be missing??? because it is just a black space for me.
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby El Bandito » Thu Dec 21, 2017 7:41 am

They need all the happiness they can get.
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby trackerrrr » Thu Dec 21, 2017 8:50 am

Oh now I gots the feels going on. 8)
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby evilmike » Thu Dec 21, 2017 9:43 am

Don't worry, Kern will have the next page filled with drow ninja killing everybody.

ANGST

Yeah, Martin totally stole the idea from him and used it in that crap Game of Chairs thing. Some people.

*rolleyes*
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby Tainted Messiah » Thu Dec 21, 2017 4:19 pm

This is all so sweet its almost giving me a toothache... *doh*

Joking aside as I said earlier I do feel that Shan and Chiri do deserve a sort of 'happily ever after' if anyone in this story really does. Still though...

- Find the placement of this chapter a bit strange as Kern is basically writing those two off for the remainder of the story maybe that was his intent and didn't think it would work as well as a sort of epilogue moment which I would disagree with since I feel this chapter while amusing I feel has broken up the pacing to what should be leading to the climactic end. That or we are going to have a yet another time skip and have mom, dad, and baby throwing out fireballs from a baby carrier helping to fend off the forces of the evil Snadya from the airship which would seem... excessive lol :3

- The panels on this page or more specifically that use of blank space seems off as others have mentioned. I know Kern likes to play with frames and spacing but having all square frames except for one in the top right doesn't feel dynamic so much as it feels like something is missing or at least to me anyway. For myself feels based on the framing of Chiri on the left Shan on the right for the others I would of imagined a panel of Shan looking at Chiri in awe or something.. but what do I know I am a terrible artist haha

Anyway its cute good for them hope they have many cute babies and I will wait for the start of the next chapter which will undoubtedly resume right in the middle of Ariel bombing the Sarg fort from the airship cause why not! *wee*
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby Junglefowl26 » Thu Dec 21, 2017 6:47 pm

evilmike wrote:Don't worry, Kern will have the next page filled with drow ninja killing everybody.

ANGST

Yeah, Martin totally stole the idea from him and used it in that crap Game of Chairs thing. Some people.

*rolleyes*

Twist: Shan gets eaten by golem bugs, giving Chiri the saddest backstory ever.
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby HoneyBee » Thu Dec 21, 2017 10:59 pm

I've waited a lifetime for this, even though it didn't happen the way I wanted it to. *cries a single tear* *tear*
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Re: Chapter 53 : page 17

Postby PSadlon » Fri Dec 22, 2017 3:44 am

Kern wrote:Thanksfully the audience won't be on fire.

Give it time, Chiri is due another mood swing or five.

Still they are a beautiful couple.
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